Monday, March 28, 2011

Homework 3/28 and 3/29

Please complete a second draft of your Cinderella story.  Remember that second drafts:


  • Are an IMPROVEMENT over the first draft
    • add dialogue
    • beef up sensory details
    • be sure all the elements are there for the Cinderella storyline
    • address coherence (ie: it has to make sense throughout)
  • Are typed, double spaced, so there is room for proofreading and editing